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Thursday, 20 December 2018

S.L.J My beast

My beast is like a tiny dragon it has tree horns one on it's forehead like a rinosaros and the two others on the side of it's head like a deer but straighter, it's scaley the colours of the scales are a nice shade of purple but mostley it's blue with a tinge of green my beast has wings and all ways looks like it's smiling also my beast has beautiful multey coloured eyes it also has feet that look like they got choped of and transplanted with another beasts feet my beasts claws could rip your skin clean of.
And that is my beast.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora, Emma!

    Thanks for completing this Summer Learning Journey activity, 'Fantastic Beast'. WOW— your description is incredible Emma, well done! I really how you've said that your beast has 'tree horns' like a deer, and another horn like a rhinoceros. The colour of it's scaly body sounds really eye-catching— I love the colours that you've chosen. The multi-coloured eyes sound hypnotic. I hope that the transplant didn't take too much out on the beast, but it sounds as though their new feet are much more effective.
    Well done for such a wonderfully written piece, Emma. I have only ONE question— what's your beasts name?

    If you like, you could draw us a picture of this beast (whatever their name may be), to give more detail that will accompany your excellent description of them.

    Really looking forward to your next post!

    Thanks,

    Jordan

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