Hi i’m Theo short for Theophilus, Hi I’m Dirl, short for Dirlene we are best friends but everyone calls us twins we do admit that we look quite alike in various ways so don’t get us mixed up or Dirl will get grumpy. We live on planet Thetis. It is a hidden planet, isolated in the middle of a lonely galaxy, far far far away from any other planet. Until one day, we were hanging round our favourite place (the zoo) when suddenly one half of the planet lit up in flames ”Ahhh!” screamed the girls. The fire killed everyone on that half instantly. We were shocked. The flames were drawing nearer. We got onto a aphilo, which is a Thetis horse. We rode to the nearest star ship and without thinking, brung the aphilos onboard. Then we took off. Soon after that the planet explode sending the ship further into space. They both screamed and cried and sobbed and wailed over the losses of their family and friends.
This is my writing we have written more but I decided to leave it to this much all the exiting things are later on , so the story right now seems boring .
My story is called planet thetis it's about to alein's (Dirl and Theo) going on a journey to earth and learning how to live even though they have very harsh conditions.
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