We made a book in my reading group Then we decided we needed to make the same charcter but in different ways so this is my ponkey. There were bad guys and good guys so ponky's a good guy and there is ditch a bad guy.
Hi Emma, My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model school, I really like your character. It's very creative, and I love the way that you have added in wings (well I think they are wings)
I would love you to make a background to make it more eye catching and colorful. How long did it take you to make?
Hi Mia You are very right they are wings (good guess I guess it's hard) We had a set task to complete it in a day it didn't take a day it's pretty easy once you get started I #'m going to put a background on it now Thanks Emma
Kia Ora i'm Rihanna fromm yaldhurst school. I like the way you used lots of colour. did you know about png? its somthing with no backgound. next time you could add some effects
so did you leanr anything fromm this comment? have a nice day and dont forget to keep up your great work
Hi Emma I really like your charter he is really interesting Next time you could tell us about your charter This is reminded me of my charter, sadly I did not get chosen but I'm fine with that
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Hi Emma, My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model school, I really like your character. It's very creative, and I love the way that you have added in wings (well I think they are wings)
ReplyDeleteI would love you to make a background to make it more eye catching and colorful. How long did it take you to make?
Good work!
Mia
Very good Emma
ReplyDeleteHi Mia
ReplyDeleteYou are very right they are wings (good guess I guess it's hard)
We had a set task to complete it in a day it didn't take a day it's pretty easy once you get started I #'m going to put a background on it now
Thanks Emma
Kia Ora i'm Rihanna fromm yaldhurst school. I like the way you used lots of colour. did you know about png? its somthing with no backgound.
ReplyDeletenext time you could add some effects
so did you leanr anything fromm this comment?
have a nice day and dont forget to keep up your great work
Hi Emma
ReplyDeleteI really like your charter he is really interesting
Next time you could tell us about your charter
This is reminded me of my charter, sadly I did not get chosen but I'm fine with that
Keep up the good blogging! :)
Mehakpreet