Kia Ora Emma, I really like all the information you put on this slide and that you gave the readers a small blurb about why you were doing this. I liked learning that when a sandstorm happens it is the top layer of sand being lifted up by the wind. Maybe next time make sure all of the writing is readable because on the second slide it was a bit hard to read.
This slide has a lot of interesting information about sandstorms. 5000 feet! That's high.
This reminds me of reading a book all about natural disasters like floods, thunderstorms and avalanches. This also reminds me of fact about camels, they have long eyelashes so it protects the eye. Well I think it does.
Hi my name is Abigail from Waikowhai Primary School I really liked how you put questions and answers in one slide,also the font can be understood.It reminded me of of bad weathers. Maybe you could write more information.
Its Ian form Yaldhurst Model School. I liked how you and Amanda picked some photos to go with the report. Maybe next time you could add why you posted this.
Hi Grace, its Emma I was in a group with my friend Amanda we were taking turns, on doing the slide info Amanda did that slide. But I really appreciate your suggestion and I am sure to pass your word on. Thanks Emma
Hi Mika Its Emma We had to read a book about natural disasters and we had to choose one thing to write about we choose sandstorms. Sandstorms can take you away even when it isn't even close to you. Thanks Emma
Hi Abigail,
It's Emma I like you comment , and somethings say watch out for whether, Thanks Emma
Hi Ian
We posted it because to tell you how dangerous things sandstorms are. Thanks Emma
Hi Emma My name is Alex I am a Year 6 student at Waikowhai Primary School. I liked your slideshow about sand storms I never new that the particles in the sandstorm could only be 1 mm big maybe next time you could tell us about how many people they can injure a year. If you would like to check out my blog here is a link http://wpsalexanderw.blogspot.co.nz/ Bye
Guten tag Emma, I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I like how you added a little sentence of what you had to do. This made me think of a natural disaster book. I wonder if this happens a lot in desserts. If you want to check out my blog it is: http://wpsbenl.blogspot.co.nz/
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Emma,
ReplyDeleteI really like all the information you put on this slide and that you gave the readers a small blurb about why you were doing this. I liked learning that when a sandstorm happens it is the top layer of sand being lifted up by the wind. Maybe next time make sure all of the writing is readable because on the second slide it was a bit hard to read.
Yours Sincerely Grace
Yaldhurst Model School
Hi Emma,
ReplyDeleteThis slide has a lot of interesting information about sandstorms. 5000 feet! That's high.
This reminds me of reading a book all about natural disasters like floods, thunderstorms and avalanches. This also reminds me of fact about camels, they have long eyelashes so it protects the eye. Well I think it does.
I wonder what it's like living in Egypt.
By Mika
Yaldhurst Model school
Link to blog http://ymsmika.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi my name is Abigail from Waikowhai Primary School I really liked how you put questions and answers in one slide,also the font can be understood.It reminded me of of bad weathers. Maybe you could write more information.
ReplyDeleteHi Emma,
ReplyDeleteIts Ian form Yaldhurst Model School.
I liked how you and Amanda picked some photos to go with the report.
Maybe next time you could add why you posted this.
Kind regards Ian
Hi Grace,
ReplyDeleteits Emma I was in a group with my friend Amanda we were taking turns,
on doing the slide info Amanda did that slide.
But I really appreciate your suggestion and I am sure to pass your word on.
Thanks Emma
Hi Mika
Its Emma We had to read a book about natural disasters and we had to choose one thing to write about we choose sandstorms.
Sandstorms can take you away even when it isn't even close to you.
Thanks Emma
Hi Abigail,
It's Emma I like you comment ,
and somethings say watch out for whether,
Thanks Emma
Hi Ian
We posted it because to tell you how dangerous things sandstorms are.
Thanks Emma
Hi Emma My name is Alex I am a Year 6 student at Waikowhai Primary School. I liked your slideshow about sand storms I never new that the particles in the sandstorm could only be 1 mm big maybe next time you could tell us about how many people they can injure a year. If you would like to check out my blog here is a link http://wpsalexanderw.blogspot.co.nz/ Bye
ReplyDeleteGuten tag Emma, I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I like how you added a little sentence of what you had to do. This made me think of a natural disaster book. I wonder if this happens a lot in desserts. If you want to check out my blog it is: http://wpsbenl.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi Emma, its Amanda here!
ReplyDeleteI really like that post.
Maybe next time you could turn the text into your words.
Nice blogging with you!