Well done for completing another Summer Learning Journey activity, 'Carbon Sinks Don't Stink!' and for telling us what food items you'd like to throw in your imaginary sink. It would be helpful for your reader, Emma, if you edited this title and said what the activity was so that they knew what it was you were trying to show. Brussel sprouts seem like everyones least favourite food item... I personally like them, they're really good fried! Avocado and cranberry sauce I can understand but why did you choose chocolate ice cream?! I thought that everyone liked chocolate ice cream.... clearly I'm wrong :D
Don't forget Emma, with small posts like this, it really helps to add some images to make it more exciting for your readers.
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Hey Emma!
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing another Summer Learning Journey activity, 'Carbon Sinks Don't Stink!' and for telling us what food items you'd like to throw in your imaginary sink. It would be helpful for your reader, Emma, if you edited this title and said what the activity was so that they knew what it was you were trying to show. Brussel sprouts seem like everyones least favourite food item... I personally like them, they're really good fried! Avocado and cranberry sauce I can understand but why did you choose chocolate ice cream?! I thought that everyone liked chocolate ice cream.... clearly I'm wrong :D
Don't forget Emma, with small posts like this, it really helps to add some images to make it more exciting for your readers.
Thanks,
Jordan