Hi Emma its Brooklyn from papakura central school i really like your fireworks writing but maybe next time if you would like to you could rhyme the words Thanks, brooklyn
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Hi Emma its Brooklyn from papakura central school
ReplyDeletei really like your fireworks writing but maybe next time if you would like to you could rhyme the words
Thanks, brooklyn