Chapter 4
Suddenly she felt like she was being watched, slowly she turned around, she looked all around, she must of imagined it. Just then she heard a floorboard “CREAK” as quick as a flash she spun her head toward the door there was Izzy standing there with a sly grin spread across her face. “Oh no” she thought. Izzy turned and retreated out the door. Madeline thought rapidly darted out of her room and tried to catch up with Izzy. She sped faster and faster trying to catch site of her archenemy. As she turned the corner she spotted Izzy fleeing out the door. She flew out the door and muffled a scream as hairy hands grabbed her and tied her up.This is my Writing It isin't finished but this is a teaser of the story.
Hi Emma,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good piece of writing and you obviously worked hard on it. you used really good descriptive words I really liked on it.
will you publish the book? I know a good place I could tell you about.
:)-willow
Hi Emma,
ReplyDeleteGreat work, this sounds so exciting and I can't wait to read the rest keep working hard and using entertaining words that really hook the reader in and left me in wonder of what will happen next.
-Keeva