Hola Emma. My name is Lavinia from Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you made your slideshow very clear, I also like how you included your slideshows. Something you could think of next time is, you could check your spelling. Like in the title, you wrote Reding, I think you meant, Reading. You could also add a little bit about what you did, also a little reflection to say how you found it and whether it was hard or easy. Other than that you did great. If you would like to check out my blog, here is the site, wpslaviniac.blogspot.com. Please feel free to leave a comment or some feedback for me. Nice work Emma! Catch you later blogger!!!
Hi lavinia it's Emma Thank you very much for the comment I will be sure that i will edit my post,and next time i put a slide on my blog it will have a review thanks again, Emma
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Hola Emma. My name is Lavinia from Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you made your slideshow very clear, I also like how you included your slideshows. Something you could think of next time is, you could check your spelling. Like in the title, you wrote Reding, I think you meant, Reading.
ReplyDeleteYou could also add a little bit about what you did, also a little reflection to say how you found it and whether it was hard or easy.
Other than that you did great. If you would like to check out my blog, here is the site, wpslaviniac.blogspot.com. Please feel free to leave a comment or some feedback for me. Nice work Emma!
Catch you later blogger!!!
Hi lavinia
ReplyDeleteit's Emma Thank you very much for the comment I will be sure that i will edit my post,and next time i put a slide on my blog it will have a review thanks again,
Emma