Hello Emma, I am Amelia from Red Hill School. I really liked how you used capital letters at the beginning of the sentences. I liked how you matched up the sentence to the picture too.
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Hello Emma, I am Amelia from Red Hill School. I really liked how you used capital letters at the beginning of the sentences. I liked how you matched up the sentence to the picture too.
ReplyDeleteHi Amelia,I go to Papakura Central School I year 5
ReplyDeleteThank you for your complement.
Emma